Friday, June 1, 2012

Tom and the dragon Retell

“Can I please go for the pier to play?” asked Tom “Sure, but I have to warn you, there is a big dragon in the cave so, never ever go near the dragon. His teeth is as sharp as sharks teeth and when go in he will ask you for a game of chess, but never ever say yes. When you beat him he will barbecue you, or perhaps if he wins, then he will ask you for a fight with a sword, so never ever say yes to the dragon. After that he will ask you if you want a ride, never ever climb on the dragon’s back. When he says open your eyes do not look around because you will fall down into the deep water”.

Tom went to the pier and hid from the dragon. Suddenly when Tom peeked out he saw a face and that face the dragon’s face  with tears coming down.

After that  Tom and the dragon went to the beach with their mums. When they got to the beach Tom and dragons mum said a nervous “hello”to each other.

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