Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Goldilocks persuasvie

I believe that Goldilocks did the wrong thing.

Firstly, she broke into the bears house. Goldilocks had no right  to go in the house. It is against the law to break into other peoples house. She didn't own the house, and also she is trespassing.

Secondly, she used things without asking and broke things. Goldilocks does not own anything in the house. She can’t  afford the things she broke. She touched things that weren't hers.

Thirdly, she left when they came home. She was rude to the three bears. She didn't  apologise.

I believe that Goldilocks should go to jail because she had no right t break in the bears house.

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