Why is a person special to me?
A special person is special to me because they love and take care of me for who I am.
Why is he special to me because he is special to me because he take care of me when I am ill and takes really good care of me. When I am sad he makes me happy and also laugh. When I if need help he would come and help me, and also she is a worker. He pushes me to do my best in everything do, he encourages me to do right things not wrong. When I need a friend he is also by my side every step of the way.
My special person is son I will never ever forget in my whole life. My special person is My dad he is a loving and caring dad.
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R1 - R6
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1. Ideas
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2. Structure and language
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3. Organisation
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R-5
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4. Vocabulary
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R-4
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5. Sentence structure
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R-4
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6. Punctuation
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R-5
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7. spelling
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R-
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