Home Is Special!!!

 Opening Statement

           Why my home is Special. First of all homes are  important to us because we grow a lot of special memories from the past that we can keep. Some of my special moments are how people gather around as one big happy family or how we celebrate something special for someone special which can be a bridge to your future. But one thing  I won’t forget is that homes are like a sunshine moment.

Body:

Firstly: Sometimes in homes you can live with maximum amount of people such as brothers, sisters, mum, dad, uncle and much much more. It is a place that shelters you and keeps you warm on a dreadful day, Also homes are important to people because they were born there.

Secondly:

Homes can be just at one place, but it can also be anywhere in the world such as: Australia, South Africa, Colombia and any other countries in the world. But if we didn’t have a home we will be sleeping on hard ground in the dark or underneath shop shelter or even get wet when it rains . You will feel cold in the wet rain. But if you have an apartment that will count as a special home to you to.

Thirdly:  

Home is a place that you treat as your own property, with respect and care. My heart will be your shelter and arms will be your home. It can also be a place gathering place. You can gather as a family for a family reunion, birthday or just have a family meeting.  

Conclusion:

Not only homes can be special but it can be your environment. But there is nothing like staying at a home that make you comfortable every single day, as long  as you live at the same house. A home is where you can start one big happy family. The home you live in can be a treasure chest of memories.

math equation on show me!!!

This is a video to show my understanding of how to solve a subtraction problem and also explain my thinking.

Refeltion on Diorama.

Reflection on our Diorama that we did with our movie groups.

Picture:

Positive:

The things we did well in our group were that everyone in our group participated and also we had different jobs like some of us worked on the fence, and other worked on other different job

Negative:

The things we didn’t do well is that we kept talking over each other and we weren't listening to what each other said. We fighted some of the time  but we got along., also we did produce what we were AIMING for, we were AIMING for something looking 3d on more Inputs of the dairy farmer.  Also our work wasn’t at standard like it was meant to be.

My difficulty was cutting, I am not a really great cutter.

Net time:

But besides that we done pretty well, But I think that we can work on our team work and communicating.

Church Strand The teaching Church!!!

This is a poster about our strand which is " Church Strand Teaching Church"

The Great Commission!!!

This is a poster of a advertisement that I did for our teaching church strand. I did this advertisement about the great Commission.

Speech Judging Criteria.

                                                                                                            

SPEAKER: Valenisia	CLASS
TITLE:  No net-book/ ( Why net-book are negative to me)		MARK
INTRODUCTION • audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information I hooked the audience because I asked question and used statistical information ✱✱✻		9  /10
Presentation and Delivery • Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from   the speech • Use of eye-contact • Relaxed stance • Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message • Variety of pace I used eye- contact.  ✱ But I should have use  pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message I am giving. And also relaxed stance		10  /15,
Content of Speech • The message of the speech is clear • Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6 • Ideas are well elaborated and supported. Use of specific vocabulary Clear sequence and flow My information about netbook was related to my topic. Next time I elaborate my speech, use specific vocabulary, and also use a clear sequence. ✱✱		10 /20
CONCLUSION Argument is summed up Has an overall impact Audience Reaction For my conclusion I summed up. But next time I should have and overall impact audience reaction.		4 / 5

GREAT SPEECH VALENSIA.  YOU HAVE REFLECTED WELL ON YOUR PERFORMANCE.

Expressive writing: fathers day

Well actually father was really a good fathers day for me because My father wasn't there but I know that he was beside me and looking down at us. But I was sure that he was celebrating fathers day in heaven with God, but I think he just wanted one more fathers day with his family. Father’s day was quite a little emotional for me and my family. It was quite an good father day because we celebrated it with our community and we had  a feed and cake with ice-cream. The youth had to serve the fathers, mother and also the kids, so we did not have to get up and go get food. Well the big kids had to, so we just helped ourselves to the food and the desert. Delicious cake, the ice- cream was really melting in my mouth. It wasn't what i expected fathers day to be, but I just wish to have one more father day with my lovely father