Church Strand The teaching Church!!!

This is a poster about our strand which is " Church Strand Teaching Church"

The Great Commission!!!

This is a poster of a advertisement that I did for our teaching church strand. I did this advertisement about the great Commission.

Speech Judging Criteria.

                                                                                                            

SPEAKER: Valenisia	CLASS
TITLE:  No net-book/ ( Why net-book are negative to me)		MARK
INTRODUCTION • audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information I hooked the audience because I asked question and used statistical information ✱✱✻		9  /10
Presentation and Delivery • Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from   the speech • Use of eye-contact • Relaxed stance • Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message • Variety of pace I used eye- contact.  ✱ But I should have use  pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message I am giving. And also relaxed stance		10  /15,
Content of Speech • The message of the speech is clear • Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6 • Ideas are well elaborated and supported. Use of specific vocabulary Clear sequence and flow My information about netbook was related to my topic. Next time I elaborate my speech, use specific vocabulary, and also use a clear sequence. ✱✱		10 /20
CONCLUSION Argument is summed up Has an overall impact Audience Reaction For my conclusion I summed up. But next time I should have and overall impact audience reaction.		4 / 5

GREAT SPEECH VALENSIA.  YOU HAVE REFLECTED WELL ON YOUR PERFORMANCE.

Expressive writing: fathers day

Well actually father was really a good fathers day for me because My father wasn't there but I know that he was beside me and looking down at us. But I was sure that he was celebrating fathers day in heaven with God, but I think he just wanted one more fathers day with his family. Father’s day was quite a little emotional for me and my family. It was quite an good father day because we celebrated it with our community and we had  a feed and cake with ice-cream. The youth had to serve the fathers, mother and also the kids, so we did not have to get up and go get food. Well the big kids had to, so we just helped ourselves to the food and the desert. Delicious cake, the ice- cream was really melting in my mouth. It wasn't what i expected fathers day to be, but I just wish to have one more father day with my lovely father

Cross Country.

This is a video of me talking about our cross country Day

Saint Pius X Feast Day

This is a video of me talking about the picture I have chosen. This is the Saint Pius X Feast Day.

Expressive Writing.

This morning when I woke up I looked outside and the sun has not awaken from it sleep. I got out of bed, it was chilly so I tried and not go back into bed because I will fall asleep again. So I walked into the bathroom and I felt like it was frosty, I tried to be tough and not go back into bed. I turned on the tap and the tap felt icy, I put my hand in the running was and straight away my hands felt frozen. Right after I washed my face I went into the room and got my uniform and Ironed it I put of my uniform and it felt like I was at a tropical Island. Later on I got organized for school. As soon as I walked outside when my aunt came it felt like it was snowing.

These are the three indicator:
used specif vocabulary. GO TIT
I have used punctuation and capital letter constantly. underlined
And also It makes Sense.